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Re: evil like a hobbit: Cal's NaPoWriMo Thread
w00t. I'm actually posting this one on time. o10 apr. boys—whether you like it or not—are people too.* small, branded sunflower seed shells make like shooting stars, or rocket launches, ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: evil like a hobbit: Cal's NaPoWriMo Thread
E gads! I totally forgot to post things. o6 apr. object permanence every time your fingers split and your face appears, I reach for you. and yet you disappear again. ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: The Adventure of the Missing Clerk
Persons of Interest Rhodera Margaret “Margot” Perkins-Swift – detective, wife of Oliver Swift, godfather of Charlie Oliver Swift – journalist, husband of Oliver Swift, godfather of Charlie Eli
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: A Tracing of Angels
Jig, Er, I haven't been digging through the cemetery per se, but I had promised a crit on it way back when, and I wanted to follow through on it; ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: YWS Radio Ads
Squee! Sureal < Of course, it's his real voice.
Apr 8, 2009 -
Re: o12. Orange: The Hazards of Love
Angel, Molto grazie! Thank you so much for your critique; I am really glad you enjoyed it. This kind of makes me want to write about Martha and Doug some ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: Do You Get It?
Doesn't Pat = Yes? ;)
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: o12. Orange: The Hazards of Love
This is the first short story from the prompt table smaur and I are doing. Also, The Hazards of Love by The Decemberists, their newest CD, could be the soundtrack ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Cal's Fanmix & Proper Critique Central [Edited 10/23/10]
Proper Critiques Posted 04/06 Angel of Death: Fighting the Blue // Our Lady Liberty [Contest Prizes] Archstormangel: Black Stars Bickazer: Vicissitudes--1. Alice deavarna_satina: Cold Promise Jiggity:
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Black Stars Prologue (R&R please!)
Hello, honey.Since this is the first time I've critiqued anything of yours, there is probably two things you should know: one, if you have any questions, ask them; two, if ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Notes
Hey, honey! Since this is, I think, the first time I've critiqued anything of yours, there is probably two things you should know: one, if you have any questions, ask ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Toby's Lunch
Hey, Linds! Since this is, I think, the first time I've critiqued anything of yours, there is probably two things you should know: one, if you have any questions, ask ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Cold Promise (fourth and final installment)
Hello, satina. Since this is the first time I've critiqued anything of yours, there is probably two things you should know: one, if you have any questions, ask them; two, ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: A Tracing of Angels
Hello, again, honey. You know the drill. Not one of your best, but I did enjoy the description of everyday events; it makes the guy that much more creepy. Also, ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Maharaj The Magician [edited]
Hey, honey. You know the drill. ;) MAGIC TRICKS I love the descriptions of the magician. :D LITTLE ORPHAN OLIVER More, please? I quite like what is there at the ...
Apr 6, 2009
